First thought: Whoa. That was beautiful.
Your command of the language is incredible. Especially when I read it aloud, I noted how smoothly it rolled off the tounge.
Another nice poem.
Aneliz Rei
p.s. And I liked the formatting, too!

Wow, I can't describe how I felt when I read this but I know this poem moved me so that my day wont suck so much. Thanks for sharing your talent.
~Nymph ^_~