It made me cry due to the current situation I'm in. WEll written. Good Job.

Much falling-ness goin' on.
I like it! ^_^
Very expressive. Keep it up.

This is beautiful. It's very sad, and I love the repetition of "Falling, falling" This is a great poem, I absolutely love it. Keep writing!

very descriptive and interesting, i love it! you love vampires...i do as well, i LOVE Hellsing, Vampire Hunter D and all vampire anime. anyway, i loved your poem, going to read more!
-icy angelwings X^_^X

This is a very good poem. Betrayl is one thing not many people will fully understand. But yet again, not everyone has been betrayed (in your case) or stood up on one of the most important nights of their high school years (my case). But when it comes to betrayl, i know what it's like.
Keep up the good writing.
RJ

Pretty good...like the repetition.

another good poem... is this about Chris? O_o
Ah well. I liked the last line. So... erm... (thinks) yea... ^^;;