very true...the more you get hurt by other people...or anything...the less willing you are to open up and truley get to know some one...

This is seriously an awesome poem!! *drools* Luff it!! "Fragiler" isn't a word, though. It should be "more fragile." x.X Sorry to have to correct that.

Hi! this has a way better Rythym. no spelling mistakes, nor grammar errors. great job ( i do asngst too)
thought i would review more i'm bored. Chaper 7 is finished. i need to go biking, but my dad's ripping up the carpet. i want to check out the river trail, i'm not allowed(still ) to go alone. soo...yea
ttyl!
-Rachel.

So...when was your heart broken? It sounds like after the heart was broken, they sealed a part of themself away, just to avoid the hurt again.