wow that's an awsome poem

most guys aren't like u and well they usually don't love that deep in a girl they haven't even been with yet.

well if u get the chance at the right time tell her how much u care for her and i hope one day u get her

i wish u luck on your writing

That's a cool little story. I like how you layed it out like a song. *Thumbs up* Nice work ;)

The poem is as beautiful as the person you wrote it about ^_^ Good work.