nice, interesting format... )

I like how you use your formats, it crates power in the words you single out. Continue to use your different formats and youll take your poetry skills to a new level.
Love,
Anthony

i finally have a use for this word... nice onomatopoeia
I love the format too
Excellent poem

0.0 wow pretty! oh what an intelligent review... what i mean to say is that I love your poetry. your formats always make the simple words very powerful. well done!

again. your stuff keeps getting more personal and abstract-wonderful! esp. the lines flash crash smash so kerouac i love it. :-D!

Hey! Somehow, this strikes me as sweet..I don't know..I liked the format, very nice :D. Love, Mia

Wow, it's really neat! Simple words and phrases compile together to entirely create wonderful images about the storm! It seems more of a nature poem rather than general... I like it a lot!