I thoroughly enjoyed this story Suekay. It is inspiring yet simple. Naturally you have a vivid flare for Writing, live your dreams Suekay, dont EVER let anyone put you down.

[Giggles] Your English teacher really managed to get his/her hands on your own personal work? How'd that happen!! Oh, my, I do apologise. Didn't mean to make fun!

Nice little piece. An inspiration to all us brain-dead peoples!

Just like the original this is a great and, um, original piece of work! I also think that the whole lampshade thing is very funny and I like the running through of events at the end. Right more stuff soon yay!

Really good. Made me smile, well done.
Your teacher was right.
-Carrie