Actually there's a funny story to that. You see, in creative writing, The teacher told us he didn't like dr. suess because of his rhyming. So to make him mad, I thought it would be funny to make the orb rhyme like the sorting hat. It's a joke i am now regretting, because It's hard to continually think up rhymes for it.

Nice poetry. One question... why is the orb talking to her in rhyme? Is it like the Sorting hat? Update both stories soon!
Nikki

Jason,
OOh. The first chapter and already things are mysterious. I can't wait to see why Tikal doesn't entirely remember Moonshine or Demetrius. Waiting for the next update.
Nikki

Hey, it's the author here. please read and write to me, let me know what you think of the story. Maybe offer me some suggestions. I may plead for some help every now and then so be prepared. Also, this is my first attempt at writing fantasy, so plaes bear with me ok? thanks.
Jason Linder