HA!! You wish. Lol. So cynical. agree w/ lindsay. Give me the chocolate! : - p

Is this about a certain person or in general? And if it is about a certain person... oh come on. You knew it was coming. Who's it about? I'm nosy. And love isn't always so sweet and pure, but it's fun to think it is, right? I like the way you wrote this. Like I was telling you before, you have a good vocabulary, and you use it in the right places. Good Job!

Very nice subject manner...the descriptions such as feeling his skin against yours and your hearts beating in time together sound very well rounded and urging..keep it up! btw, thanks for reviewing my poems...*adding you to my fav writers* We can keep this up back and forth if you would like :)

Screw soulmates. Give me chocolate. Good poem though- pretty symbolism and stuff. Yea.

lovely.
pure, and sweet.
[BabY Gia]