This touched me deeply. When ever I feel this way- I'm going to reread this poem. It's amazingly written and beautiful.

All I have to say... the person that is dictating this poem (like the person for POV, i can't find a right way to word what I'm trying to say.lol I've tried like five times already) is a great person! GO THEM! lol. That ending is great. It's kinda what people have to say everytime they have a friend that's thinking about comitting suicide, you know? Like, it's only one day. Or just one week. It seems like a long time to wait for things to get better, but it's really a small price to pay for what you're thinking of doing instead! I love this poem. Be proud in knowing that this is honestly the only suicidal poem that I really totally love. GREAT JOB!

GOOD. Finally a POSITIVE poem about having ** happen. I love the ending- it was so surprising but it made me smile. That's the kind of thing I want to hear young lady.

That is so true...just one day can change your whole mind frame. I have felt like that a lot...and you know what? The good things that are in my life dont stop me...just the happiness of other people do. Anyways, you have beautiful imagery ...it almost felt as if I were that person...great job!