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MaraudersMagelet 2004-04-07 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. It touches me. It is exactly what I feel. It is so hard to be friends with someone you want to be more with. Good job, you can really feel the emotions.
Thank you so much for your reviews for "It Is Not Fair" & "We Said." I am so happy you understood what I was trying to get across. It really means a lot to me when people review my poems/fiction.
SumiFritzN 2004-04-04 . chapter 1
OMG LAUREN! This one is brilliant! OMG. I really like this one. It's like what I keep trying to say in some of my poems, but I never feel like I really totally get it. I mean, I like the stuff I write, they came from my head after all! Lol j/k, but like... this is one of the main ideas that's always in the back of my mind, you know? This is great! I LOVE THIS POEM!
Lellida 2004-03-23 . chapter 1
*cough*Ares*cough* it's ok- I'm not partial to love poems so yea. you ended it the same way as the other one!
bummer 2004-03-23 . chapter 1
Touched. Its *touched* not toach or whatever the hell you have on the summary.
Eh, kinda too soppy for my taste. To each his own I suppose.
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