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| Pink-WannaB 2004-04-09 ch 1,   | Wow. I really like this, It's very dark and sad. Wonderful! |
| IpsoFacto 2004-03-28 ch 1, | O.O Scary. I like the new perspective. |
| AsMoon 2004-03-23 ch 1, | Whoa! An interesting view to guardian angels. Very well written! The only thing is: in the last line, you can't say "till" because that refers to something such as "tilling the soil." It has to be "until." Keep up the good work. And great summary! It really grabbed my attention. |
| Funsmoke 2004-03-23 ch 1, | I love it. Great style and intensely beautiful. I'm certain others might find it unspeakably creepy but I absolutely love it. |