I thought it was good until you said
"Just for fun I drew Jesus's boyfriend and a girl I pretended was his little sister. I wrote a caption:
Random woman: Die, Traitor! *throws rock*
Roman official: That's what you get for undermining the authority of the Roman Empire.
Jesus: This is painful."
I liked the strory except that.I'm a christian so I don't like people making fun of The LORD Jesus Christ.I read one of your other stories,called the flood.I wonder if you remmebr me.