This is a very good piece on a grandmother. It is personal yet universal, sad yet happy. Very nice work.

Beautiful! Makes me teary eyed. I loved these lines:
"I will be a man, to live and learn
And withhold the legacy of benevolence
You withheld, though did not force
Your will shall be forever
Just as it is said
Thy will be done."
Good work here, keep writing!
-Linnet

I got a little teary-eyed at this Celest. I knew how much your grandmother meant to you even before you wrote this. But the way you wrote it...I am sure she would be very proud. Beautiful...simply beautiful.
Keep writing.
-Seras