|Reviews for Stop The Torment|
| Aleonic Relic 3/29/04 . chapter 1
i can relate, this happened to me once except i was caught in more of a all out war that was directed through me most of the time, bad times. this is a good poem, no errors so it's well written.
| TheUni 3/24/04 . chapter 1
I don't agree with the idea of the poem, but it works. Try to make the lines in your stanza's longer.
Forever and a Day
| Zeedox 3/24/04 . chapter 1
Wonderful, wonderful. The poem, of course, not the fight. Not that I'm very good at reviews but... *rubs his back head* It was nice. Really.
Well, that's my little opinion, enjoy it!
| Two Headed Person 3/24/04 . chapter 1
Head 1: Interesting. How did you get the poem to center in the middle of the page?
Head 2: ...dude!...that was my question! damn... well anyways... i like this poem because i know what your feeling right now... it always suck to be in the middle of everythign and you always have to take a side... damn those people!
Head 1: Lol. I took your question! We share the same damn body! Anyhow, yes, I get how you are feeling in this piece. It's short and sweet and to the point.
Head 1 & Head 2: Later Man...
Accounts: (and yea, they are real)
Head 1: Soulless Wanderer
Head 2: Darkened Loner