Wow, this is so good. I love it. It caught my eye by the title.

Yeah. Im still editing the story. I see her in blond hair too. Thanks for your comments. It helped!

Loved it again. =]

This was stunning. It's a really beautiful piece...

This is great! I really like it. Thanks for your reviews on right kind of wrong, and yes, I was going to delete that chapter anyway, after I uploaded it i remembered what was supposed to happen in between
Shadow

No no...sad...*cry* Good job! Are you continuing?