 Shadow of Silver 2004-04-10 . chapter 1This is one of my favorite poems yet. Although, like everyone, there are some mistakes that I found, like "Why do I do this to me?". I think it should be "Why do I do this to myself?".
And those 3 lines "Come ANY other time but during a test
And especially not during one on quadratic equations, please.)"
I have really no comment on it, but I don't understand how that comes i ^_^
Otherwise, this is my favorite poem. |