I love this poem! It shows a wounded person, who's bitter and maybe angry (but who can blame them?) and it's just /so moving/. It was a great piece.

Honestly, this poem gave me goose-bumps. “All I see is You kissing Her” reminded me of a lot of hard times involving heartbreak. It is very well written but still needs a little work. Two thumbs up.

this is such a nice poem. it kinid of relates to me too. anyway, nice job. review me whenever u can. thnx. =)

This is really good. It reminds of Mr Brightside by The Killers.

wonderful poem. ^_^ great poem, greater poet!

SP

How true this all seems. We have always had those that we care about turn the other way, and we are left to wonder why. Sometimes there is never an answer, but we still have to care.

A pain i am all to familiar with.Except I kissed a girl who was already with someone. But I knew she would be broken by him and now all she does is cry. Anyway keep writing my wotk is not unlike your own except I am a amatuer check it out. And keep writing your really good.

beautiful poem...i almost cried...okay maybe i did just a little but that's a good thing isn't it? you write really well and it's like i can feel your emotions through your words...=(

Hmm, I have this problem too. GREAT poem!
Keep writing,
~Cancerian Queen~

The tragic thing is, I greatly relate to this ;_;

You made me crie... But that`s a good thing, right? :)

hey thats a gr8 poem, did you write this from experience? i kno exactly how u feel and its funny because the guy im thinking about wants me and him to go to norway when he turns 18. neway i really like the way u write!

wow, i loved that poem!!! write more like it!!! (please read my things)

Simply beautiful.

Oh my Goodness!!!! That poem is so wonderful, I have the exact same feelings about a boy I Love, he is being used by someone as well!! GREAT POEM!!!