hm...a shade of thought...but that could be anything?i think i see that dark "shade of thought" as well as the unspoken positive one. that made me think...

I liked this poem a lot. It was vey good. It got it's message across in a way that wasn't boring. I completely identified with it. Good work!

Heh, I've wanted to say that to my friends a lot. You wouldn't know it from my poems, but I do. Have I told you how much I love your poems? They're great. You're great. (I gotta stop gushing before I drown someone)

hi! this was a nice poem idea, but the rythym breaks constantly. You might want to redo it.
Very good idea though! good job!
Also, i have posted up to ch.6 in Dangerous Skies now. thought you might wanna know!
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*

This is sort of like a...I don't want to say self-help but I also don't not want to say it's not. I don't know...I guess I'm indecisive on my judgement for this poem.