Needs more, MUST BE FINISHED! well written though

O...K... I decided to read and see if you could write a good lemon Shin-Chan. This is a good lemon anyways. I am actually bored out of my mind, so I'm gonna start doing some of my work before I'm stuck with too much to do over the holidays. XD

Nice Story Oddball...very sensitive and moving, very catching, especially with the "teeth grazing the earlobe":)! Very Good! I want to read more, so write more, or else I kill u okay? We have deal? Okay, goodbye...
~Kel