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| witchwriter 2006-03-10 ch 1,   | wow that was short! |
| LittleLimerick83 2004-05-24 ch 4, | I'm really enjoying this. You write extremely well. Keep it up. |
| Kazzi 2004-05-24 ch 4, | Go Caroline! _ Wow I never thought I would ever say that. that sounds really weird to my own ears. Especially me saying it lol. _ Bob: Hi! _ Update soon! I need stories to keep me going - GCSE's are HELL! |
| LittleLimerick83 2004-05-20 ch 3, | Wow, this is really interesting. I love the way you make the plot unfold so gradually. it's suspenseful. Keep writing! |
| kazzi 2004-05-20 ch 3, | For a girl based on me - wow - she's hot girl! I am not! lol - But oh my God - The Rasmus that is my favourite song! How did you know! _ Bob: I love you! |
| Bob n Kazzi 2004-04-17 ch 2, | That's fine Blade, you know. - Bob: A new boyfriend? :O *sobs on Joe's shoulder* - *pushes Bob off and hugs Joe* Joe! I play a part in her storee e e e e! lol! |
| Excluded 2004-04-15 ch 2, | As good as the first chapter,like I knew it would be.Thanx for sending that review I'm really grateful though that lie about that being the best prologue got me,but thanx for trying.Keep going! |
| Bob n Kazzi 2004-04-10 ch 2, | Hey! She has the same name as someone you and I know extremely well! - lol, I am liking this sotyr! How come you haven't emailed me in ages though dear? I'm most upset! - Please have a look at my updated story Transition! I love you guys! - Bob: *smoochies* _ Love to Joe! |
| Damaged 2004-04-09 ch 2, | M .. wow ... now I'm VERY interested in this story .. excellent chapter .. update soon!! |
| Dark Lalage 2004-04-02 ch 1, | this is really good and u should keep writing! it's graphic but thats how i like stories so keep writing your a really good author! |
| Damaged 2004-03-27 ch 1, | 0_0 OOh! What happens next?! Update soon! |
| Excluded 2004-03-25 ch 1, | Oh my god!Just this one short chapter moved me,it made me want to cry.Just imagining the child brung a lump to my throat.I hope this review will encourage you to go on,because I loved these few paragraphs. |
| Bob n Kazzi 2004-03-25 ch 1, | Wow. I think this could be good. |
| evilcleo 2004-03-25 ch 1, | very interesting |
| cutemissheather 2004-03-25 ch 1, | uhm..wuh happened |