wow that was short!

I'm really enjoying this. You write extremely well. Keep it up.

Go Caroline!
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Wow I never thought I would ever say that. that sounds really weird to my own ears. Especially me saying it lol.
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Bob: Hi!
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Update soon! I need stories to keep me going - GCSE's are HELL!

Wow, this is really interesting. I love the way you make the plot unfold so gradually. it's suspenseful. Keep writing!

For a girl based on me - wow - she's hot girl! I am not! lol
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But oh my God - The Rasmus that is my favourite song! How did you know!
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Bob: I love you!

That's fine Blade, you know.
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Bob: A new boyfriend? :O *sobs on Joe's shoulder*
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*pushes Bob off and hugs Joe* Joe!
I play a part in her storee e e e e! lol!

As good as the first chapter,like I knew it would be.Thanx for sending that
review I'm really grateful though that
lie about that being the best prologue
got me,but thanx for trying.Keep going!

Hey! She has the same name as someone you and I know extremely well!
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lol, I am liking this sotyr! How come you haven't emailed me in ages though dear? I'm most upset!
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Please have a look at my updated story Transition! I love you guys!
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Bob: *smoochies*
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Love to Joe!

M .. wow ... now I'm VERY interested in this story .. excellent chapter .. update soon!!

this is really good and u should keep writing! it's graphic but thats how i like stories so keep writing your a really good author!

0_0 OOh! What happens next?! Update soon!

Oh my god!Just this one short chapter moved me,it made me want to cry.Just
imagining the child brung a lump to my
throat.I hope this review will encourage
you to go on,because I loved these few
paragraphs.

Wow. I think this could be good.

very interesting

uhm..wuh happened