this ones really gr8 too...cept now i hav the word "keep" ringing in my head, lol XD

This is really cool, cool, memory theme. I love the whole thing about the past experiences, seems like we've had alot in common. the repeated verse is really nice. Great read over all
Awsome job
~me

It was *sobbing* so beautiful *sniffle* I enjoyed reading it! Its inspirational!