Well I glad that Micah and Sierra worked things out. Great story. I loved all of the characters.

I really liked this story they are a really cute couple. I didn't see that coming with Micah and Sierra I thought they were gonna be announcing their engagement anytime. I realy like them together. It would be great if you still decieded to do a sequel. I really like all of your stories i've read so far.

Wonderful story! Only problem is (I don't know if you have been told this before) ya'll is used to refer to more than one person (like "you all") and at times in the story it seemed to be used for a singular person. Other than this, I loved it!

Great story, it so going on my favorites.

what a stuck up little... Yea. Joshua just got on my nerves a bit. Very well written!

-stareyed14

So I just finished reading your story and I think it was an pretty good. The plot was thought out enough and the writing was okay. It, for the most part, kept me entertained, though there where parts of it that where childish. I have to say though that I wish you would have done some research on architects before you starting writing about them.

In the story Willow is 27 and has already started to make a name for herself in the architecture field, which is totally unrealistic. At 22 you graduate from a bachelors program, then you have to complete 1-5 more years for a masters (depending on the school –and if you stayed at the same one- and if you have a bachelors in architecture or not). That brings you to at least 23. Then you have at least three years of internship hours. That means you are 26. Then at least a year to make the licensing exax (I have heard it taking people 10 or 15 years to complete). That brings you to at least 27 years old. There is no way that she could have been as well known as you state in the story at 27. There is a reason that you never hear about architects who are under 35 (if that). The most well known architects are into their 50’s or later.

I also do not think that the way you portrayed Texas in certain parts of your story is accurate or fair.

i loved it!

wow. lol i think ur sex chapter needs a little more detail, but your story so far is awsome. :) well keep it up!

Hey Krista. I just finished reading this one. And I thought that it absolutely a good read. But is that the end?

Oh wow, why don't you have more reviews?! This fic is great! I love it! The only thing though is that I thought that newborn babies can only drink milk from their mother's breast. But yeah. I think we all wish we had our own Brody :( He pretty much defines the perfect guy ever :) Hehe. UM I don't really have a lot to say except that this story is addicting :) And long and I like it that way.

It was kind of cheesy how Micah & Sierra got together too, so actually I was quite relieved to see that they had broken up because it basically showed that even though they seemed to be doing all the same things as Brody & Willow, they weren't the same. I don't know; I think that the variation was nice.

I wish that Lauren hadn't had to die, but I guess that's just life. Now she can be with her husband. I love Willow & Brody together. Seriously, they are just the epitome of cute :D Keep up the good work and continue writing! If Brighton & Jordy's story is completed, then I think I'll go check that out... maybe just to see Willow & Brody so happily together :D

-- Alyssa

Awesome story. ^_^

GOOD STORY

Good story, thoroughly entertaining and intriguing, pretty cool, heh even with all the mushiness ;)

Thank you so much for this very wonderfull story! It is very touching, sweet, sad and cute all at once. I enjoyed reading it so much, and still come back and read a chapter here and there every few days. Thank you! AR

don't quite know what this is about yet, but i'm going to put it on favorites.