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| Earthsong12 2004-03-26 ch 1,   | Again, very wondeful. I think that "She drew Kirk a amused smile" should be "threw Kirk an amused smile" Yay, I love your writing! It's so good! |
| Ancamna 2004-03-26 ch 1, | Gee, that's a good idea - writing other stories to learn more about your character. Normally I just do character profiles... I like how your story was for Miriam, but you wrote it from a different point of view. She didn't even show up until the middle! It shows her as a side character and how other people react to her. Very nice! ^_^ |