i luv the vocabulary use...cept the only problem w/ that was that i didnt know wat the title meant!
LOL IM SO LAME LOL
anywayz, it was really good, as i said, vocabulary use was excellent, u really hav a way w/ words, katie, lol

this is a really cool poem, i love the whole part with the screaming out, and laughing at nothing at all. It's a realy great poem, with an awsome ending
Good job
~me