Twa very much seattle. why was there a four ear old on your bus?

Hmm. . . mice poem. A little comber maybe, and I've not been to Seatle so I can't tell you whether thats accurate or not. But it was very good a conjuring an image.

PS Thanks for reviewing "Broken Barrier"

Seattle = rain, right? :) I haven't actually been to Seattle yet, but I have been right across the Sound from it... Hmm, maybe it did count as part of Seattle. I have always wanted to explore that city a bit. Wait... I have been THROUGH it...yeah...just not stopped. Except in a suburb (where people live in sort of fibro houses). Nice poem!

it douse sound like seattle (i live thare two)

thinking to yourself? i like how you think, then. i like how it sounds too. ive never been in seattle, so ive never quite had that feeling of everything silent. except in the winter. god i love the snow. :D

thats good... i like the "and the sky cries salty tears" line. you're right about the feeling of seattle... lol its always wet except during the summer. i also like the concept of having silance "amid" other stuffs.