sad and depressing, but i like this. well written, full of emotion. nice rhyming too, wonderful work on this piece. keep up the awesome writing!

It reminds me of that poem you wrote. The one that went with the picture of Omi, from Weiss. Remember? You're so good at creating rhyming stanzas. I can't make anything rhyme. Mine is free verse. I have to struggle to get rhythym. I ENVY YOU!

hee hee we're in a morbid mood today LG. Alas, beware of the sea. Anyways, great poebut you broke your rhyme scheme a few times