but for some reason we could never find a suitable drummer...best line there.

Nice story devon, kinda feel for your characters, some of the same things happened to me.

And we still can't keep a drummer!

loved the story, its awsome. so sad but happy and great. it was really an amazing story.

That almost made me cry! I'm not an easily moved person, either. I like how you ended it, though. I never feel like a story is complete if it is just a happy ending. Yours truly seemed realistic. Fantastic. You're welcome, also.

Aww...that was so so good. I'm so happy you finished it, that was one of the bests. And for my Mesmerizing story I'm making them scan through their life while their dead. It's not freaky or anything. But this was really good!

I hate sad endings. I know theyre more realistic but theyre so... sad. I dunno Good job tho.

hey i just read all 21 chapters n it was amazing ur very talented! it made me laugh n it made me cry n not many stories can make me cry so be very proud of yourself! your writing can take you very far in life keep up the amazing work!

Oh! Such a plot twist! It was terribly sad (which is good for the occasion of the story) and you captured the emotions very well. You had me feeling for the family, too, even though they aren't real. That's how good a job you did.

That was sad. I'm upset now but it has nothing to do with you. My family had just got over a death in the family and I wasn't able to cry and now I'm so upset. This was a nice chapter but it was kind of unreadible. When you are about to save your stories if you save it was a webpage, found in file, then it'll look so much better.

no wonder she was in a bad mood. maybe she sensed it

This story went by pretty fast, like they are famous already! But it's good, I like the idea! Write more!
Laura

Writers block, ugh i hear you. I hope u get over it though. I gotta jet. Cya later.

take your time really, i understand writer's block so go ahead and wait. it's good, i just don't think it's realistic for them to be famous just like that. it's good though

Poor Seth! At least he's going to be okay. I haven't reviewed in a while, so I just wanted to stop by and say that the chapter with the show and when Kaylee was talking with her father were great! I can't wait to see more!

Poor Sethy

Hm, I wonder. Is RCA then same label Thorne's dad works for. And if not will they end up competing?