Not to harsh you or anything, but that's almost the exact same arguement everyone has. I'm not sayin' you should listen to your father. God knows I don't. But sometimes you gotta just pick your battles. Anyway reading your short stories is actually very theraputic. Good to know I'm not the only kid with problems. I'm gonna keep readin even if you wont see this.

This just seemed like a short rant that you posted...I've seen these types of things on this site one too many times. I noticed that there is a lack of story, lack of description...I also noticed a few spelling and grammar errors. I'm not trying to flame, just trying to offer a bit of constructive criticism...Keep writing.
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A bit short, but its interesting! Keep up the good work!