i loved the last half, some really fabulous lines

OMG this is so awsome! ) i just love your poems! you have lots of talent! I love them all! hehe i really liked your review for my story. i tried to get Nathan as much of a guy as i could. it wasnt really hard since i have 2 brothers. i sort of got Nathan's whole personality and looks off my older bro. Brandon i got off my little bro because he tries to protect me and make me happy constantly. he is such a pest but it is awsome to know he will be there for me! okay i sort of got off subject. i really like your poems alot keep up the fab. work.
later
Naede