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| Frodo13 2005-04-27 ch 1,  | abusereally good |
| glitterjewele 2004-06-03 ch 1, | abuseaw . . . this is so cozy. actually, it reminded me of princess mulan's haikus (which i adore, so that should be taken as a major major compliment ;). great alliteration in the first line, it set the tone well. i'm just getting this neat image of warmth and firelight and cushions and hot chocolate with marshmallows - none of which is spoken of, which makes you one heck of an evocative haiku artist in my book. way to spark the imagination! ;) nice! |
| JJR Meerraf 2004-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI have a poem with the exact same title! *GASP!* Thief! No :), I'm just pulling your leg. I do have the same title but that's all, don't worry :). This was good stuff, now I get to see your haiku which is just as good as your other poety I've read so far. I'm impressed. Good work, all around! |
| Needa S 2004-05-11 ch 1, | abuseNice, the image is vivid. Excellent work! Needa S. |
| Jimmy Jazz 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseLove it, fantastic work. Particularly the last line. Great work. |
| Miz E. Mak 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abusethat is cool. I really need to post some haiku of mine, and write more too. Thanks for reminding me how awesome haiku are. write on. |
| Children of the Root 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abuseit sounds like a dang good idea. *sits down on the ground* Good haiku, beany! Very cool. |
| Mime 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is short, but VERY effective. For an instant after reading this, I glimpsed a tired, but happy man, sitting on a rock near a brooke, bathing in the sunshine... |
| ChaoxAngel 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseSo Beautiful, and So Meaningful. ~DW |
| obsidian katana 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abusegreat haiku. yeah, we all need to rest sometime, even those who spend their lives wandering. nice job on this. keep writing! |
| teh tarik 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseVery restful...I 'd like to be a wanderer someday ^_^ |
| Faded Flowers 2004-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse^_^x very good-- reminds me of kenshin a little n_nx |
| Wasted Postage 2004-03-26 ch 1, | abuseOOh. I liked this so much! It was... mystical! Excellent work! ~*~AbunaiChikara |
| swirlygirl 2004-03-26 ch 1, | abusevery nice i liked it...keep writing! |