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Reviews For: Hold Me Tight: Final Journey - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Dances-with-stars
2006-03-07
ch 25,
abuseno! They can't die! You are such a horrible person!j/k Aw man I hate trajedies. You did really well though, I was crying at the end!
DreamGirl101
2005-10-21
ch 26,
abusei like the first ending better. very good. over all i think i would like the alternet ending better if you finshed it. But i have a question are you writing another sequel?

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Tsuta
2004-07-04
ch 26,
abuseGood story. Nice ending, loved it all the way through...
Scorpio
2004-07-04
ch 26, anon.
abuseOH! That certainly dried up my tears, (and the river that was flowing outta my bedroom!) lol! God! I even laughed in some parts of this chapter. It was cute, as usual! Oh I love this story! And thank you so so much for this alternate, dry (non-teary I mean) ending! I liked this one much much better! I am not saying that I hated the other one. It was just as great as this, but it was way too sad, coz they die! Oh anyways, i'll just think of them all alive! lol! Hehe, thanx once again! I loveed it!
Scorpio
2004-07-04
ch 25, anon.
abuseOMG! I'm crying! I'm actually crying rivers! OH!! This is so so sad! Oh!! I can't remember if I've cried like this before, (of course in Gone with the Wind), but other than that, just one more story, but this is on the top of anything I've read! OMG! I can't believe they BOTh die!? Oh this is so sad! *sobs* God, what are my parents gonna say if they see me like this. I think I better lock myself in my room, and let all the tears out, and get a grip over my self! OH! This is just way too sad! You one great, hell of a writer! I'll give you that. Oh yeah, I love the way you write! It's just to, to intense and emotional! Oh! God! I can't see the screen. Ok, i gotta go now.
Take care! That was one great story! SO SAD! *somebody pass me a box of tissues!*
Jaded Breeze
2004-06-30
ch 23, anon.
abuseGood chappie. I like this story! Keep up the good work and update soon!
MaryMclin
2004-06-26
ch 14, anon.
abusehey btw, it should be "moral" ;) just to make your story every more perfect than it already is
MaryMclin
2004-06-26
ch 13, anon.
abuseyou mean "alliance" but not "allegiance" or something like that right?
and also...just wanna let you know that it should be spelled like "tired" not "tiered"
keep up your good work anyway
Scorpio
2004-06-12
ch 20, anon.
abuseAw. That was so cute! lol! Anyways, UPDATE SOON!
xhianglian
2004-06-12
ch 20,
abusehahaha
Toby is so cute! eh 'woman' lol
please do update soon i wish u had a scene where she hits him again, i wonder what he'd do??
/X
Scorpio
2004-06-11
ch 19, anon.
abuseOMG! OMG! I CRIED! U made me cry! I jus can't stop crying! This is soo touchy! Oh! That was so...emotional! Anyways, i loved it! What is a story if it doesn't make u cry, right? Oh and now i have to watch that movie, A Walk to Remember. Anyways, don't think too much abt that alternate ending ur writing for me! lol! U HAVE TO WRITE IT! I'll die if they die! OMG! This is THE best story i have read. Ok maybe a few others. but this is definately on my top 5 list! Anyways, thanx for another great chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Scorpio
2004-06-09
ch 18, anon.
abuseOH YAY! THANK YOU SO SO MUCH! WOW! That was a BIG relief! Now I can have a peaceful sleep...knowing that there is going to be a happy ending, right?
I just love those two! I mean they seem so cute together! And to part them would be a heart break! Anyways, thanx for another great chapter! Love ur story! Hehehe, how can I ever come to hate this story!!?? And esp. with such a sweet author who listens to what i say...no ways can I ever hate it! lol! Haha! Anyways, UPDATE SOON!
xhianglian
2004-06-09
ch 18,
abusetrajedy? oh how could you be so evil?? *sobs* pass me a kleenex b4 i start with the waterworks
...X
Scorpio
2004-06-08
ch 17, anon.
abuseHun!? What is that that supposed to mean: "A tragedy that ends the story of one of my most favorite love stories of all time. That’s all I’m going to say…" OMG! NOW ur REALLY driving me crazy! Please no! I don't want this story to end in a bad tragic way! I hate tragedies! *sniff sniff* Please no! (I should really be careful when i read the summaries of the stories! I saw that Fantasy part, but not the Tragedy part! Or else i would have NEVER clicked on ur story! And now that i have, oh God Please NO! Don't end this in a bad way!! Think positive, ok? Give this story a happy ending! PLEASE! I'M PRATICALLY BEGGING U! NO BAD ENDING!
Anyways, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I just love this story...until now. If u plan any weird tragic scene, i'll HATE it! lol! hehe!
Scorpio
2004-06-07
ch 16, anon.
abuseGood! This is an awsome story! Please! I hope the story doesn't end with Toby sending her back to earth! lol! Please NO! Im glad that for this chapter he doesn't send her. Anyways, hope that they just don't split up, or anything like that. If it's nothing like this that ur planning, then im ok. BTW, just what tragedy have u in mind? I am going crazy! Please let me know, ok? Anyways, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY!
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