Hi,

This story is great!

The coupling is great also!

Please continue writing!

I don't normally review, I just read but I had to this time :)

Great story again!

wow! kwel! i jus read ur story! (obviously)its so good! i really wanna hear more about Calissa and Saxon! they are by far my fave characters! also about what happened between Lily and Calissa! i was also wondering whether Tallie is being beaten u by her dad? if she is i thought that it would be kinda kwel for Rie to find out (walking into it or summat) and beatin the sh*t outta him lol...ok maybe im a bit strange...oh well...i'v been stranger hehe:D well nyway tis a great fic!

luv hell xx

I like this so far, I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

You are too cool, I swear. Loved the chapter and I figured that things would boil over sooner or later with those two. Oh, but I can only think of how she'll react now that she's back in her human form again. Wouldn't know what I'd say to the love of my life after I'd went and cut thier face...and almost killed them...yeah, wouldn't know. Ok, I'm good, I'm happy, and I'm far passed awake. Swear I could light up a darkened room with how wide my eyes are right now. Eh, anyways, onto the next chapter.

Phoenix

Wow, and I don't mean wow look at that rainbow over there I mean wow, this was a good chapter. Had me all leaning into the screen and everything. Totally destroyed my black sugar aka coffee while I was reading. Lol, I'll probably get all hyper in a minute or something. Anyways...wow...great chapter. Keep up the great work, and I'm going to keep reading becuase the author of this story is just too cool and her story just gets better and better.

Phoenix

I'd be angry too, having told him all that stuff about my past and then he just goes and brushes me off...punk. Not that I don't like'm though, good guy still. Yay, another chapter looked at. I can't tell you enough how I'm enjoying your story. How I ever got side tracked off of reading this thing is nothing short of a miracle because this is great. Oy, and thank you for the authors not *nudge nudge*. Love you for it. Alright *rubs hands together eagerly* next chapter.

Phoenix

She's missing, oh no. Aww, poor Saxon, I'm sure he'll find her. Or she'll find him...or something. And Ijako, that sneaky little expletive. Messing with Fern and Alex...at least I think he was messing with Alex too. Stupid short term memory. Alright well, onward to the next chapter. Had me some coffee I did :o) Eh, well, you might as well call it black sugar.

Phoenix

Ah arguments, hateful things, but they do serve thier purpose. Another great chapter, well done :o). Oy I'm tired though, just ate and after I eat I usually sleep. But, enjoying this too much, so I'll keep reading. At least until my eyes clamp shut in protest.

Phoenix

Alright, I had somethind down for the previous chapter but my fingers decided to go haywire and I ended up just clearing the screen...stupid fingers. So, the previous chapter was good, aand fyi I still love and will never hate your story, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. As for this chapter, poor Fern. Hopefully she won't get anyworse, and ah, poor Kieran, and then there's Tallie and Rei, rude little bugger e is. The story is getting along great. In fact, moving on again. Next Chapter.

Phoenix

I haven't even read the chapter yet, but oy!, how could you say I'd even come close to hating your story. Your story and hate shouldn't even be in the same sentence, especially with my name in it -.- Love the story, and I should punish you for thinking otherwise...anyways, onto to reading the chapter. *Can't believe she said that, I swear...*

Phoenix

Cruel words indeed. Ah I'm so glad that I don't have a temper like that. Not to say that I can't be cruel -.- Anyways, great chapter, too bad Calissa didn't catch the fine tuning of that 'love' mishap. Time will tell of later days. Next chapter.

Phoenix

I li~ive. :o) Heya, how've you been? Thought I was dead and gone, eh? Well, I've been busy to put it lightly, but not busy enough to never come back and keep reading your story, which is getting better and better by the way. I've probably already said that, but compliments rule. So, expect more reviews from me, especially since you're adding more chapters to this thing. I love your story, and keep up the good work. Later.

Phoenix

O...M...G. I can hardly even believe what I've just seen.

What seems like ages ago, I read this story and enjoyed it immensely. As if possessed by something unheard of, I was subconsciously guided back here by a twist of fate, only to find that it's still going, and I am at a loss of words. At the risk of sounding overly sentimental, allow me to explain why. Back when I first got into this story, things were simply looking up for me in every way possible, and I always looked forward to each new chapter. Needless to say, I associate your story with good times in life. Better times.

As for me, I am just one of those faceless, nameless entities who reads way too much but rarely ever graces anyone or anything with a review, though after seeing the progress this little story has made over time, I feel that it's the least I can do. While re-reading it and getting caught up to speed, I found myself reliving those feelings all over again. Please, please say that you will finish this story. So much character development has occurred, so much romance, and so many new faces have been introduced (how many of them are gonna stick around I wonder)...the vastly outnumbered villains (who I actually happen to like) are finally making themselves known, and it's all just so great. *sniff*

I'm doing myself a favor I should have done a long time ago and placing you under author alerts. Assuming you ever see this, I sincerely wish you the best of luck with this story.

P.S. I am and always have been Fern and Kieran's #1 fan (Kieran being my favorite character, and also my favorite name, which I have used in just about every roleplay in existence.) I'm a sucker for those innocent kinds of relationships. If anybody dares to contest my right to any of these claims, I will stab them to death with a spork. Yes, you heard me. A friggin' spork.

Thank you very much for reading, and good luck whatever you decide to do.

Hey, I really think that story has the potential in it. It is a GREAT story. I love the idea of 3 heros travel on an adventure. Calissa is the main of the 3. I like her personality. I like the other two, too. Good writing and PLEASE UPDATE MORE!

Ok this is to all the readers of fantasy in Fictionpress...why in the world have you not read and reviwed this story!?!?!? There is less then 100 reviws of this masterpiece!! sorry bex for taking up your valuable review space to rant on the stupidity of people but I thought it was necesary. Also next time Orion updates I am posting a mesage there to all his readers to check this out...cause they are surly missing out on another great story!

Your fan,LP