oh, if only I had dream's like these. Each 'dream' sounds cliched, and yet are entirely unique. This is a keeper, I like it!

Lol...yeah, definitely creepy poem! Dreams are scary...great imagery though! Good job! Keep writing! Love, Mia

Cool interesting.. I find it very good to read!

Interesting... I like how this poem has the same kind of irrational horror of a real nightmare. The part with the little people/big people/matchboxes was a litle confusing, and didn't really flow as nicely as the rest of the poem.
Otherwise, good job.
~Willow

I think this was excellent. the running feel of it taints it (pleasantly) with a slight hysteria, an almost-panic at the back of the mind. the description is great in creating some sort of context to explain the feeling behind this dreamland, and the consistent contrasting in language and the 'stories' you relate adds an essential element and helps to tie the whole piece together.
very much enjoyed :)
mezzie

I love it.. that was quite a creative "tango with words". Well done. That was the perfect nightmare.

Wow, whatever you were on when you wrote this, I want some! Just kidding :o) I like it...it has this creepy, surreal quality to it. It appeals to the strangeness in me. Awesome poem! *Now adding it to my Favorite Stories List*

You overused 'and' as a starting word, consider removing a few of them. Other than that very well done.

Fascinating. You know, they have pills to help you sleep. . . . .
But occassionally the scary dreams are the most profound. I used to not be able to sleep at all (this was in elementary school) because I was absolutely convinced that our house was going to be robbed every night. As irrational as that dream was. . . . .it made me think a lot about motivation for people to do stuff like that. You learn a lot about your perception of the human race through intense, demonic dreams.

Wow...very powerful, and yes, scary. You said you were going to write something like this. At the end, you start to sound like Kyle with the random depression-ness stuff. Are you sure you are OK? I'm here if you need me.

more like nightmareland! I like the descriptions on thing whats up with
?Reality I dont get the question mark

not your best. most emphatically not your best.
but not too shabby.

Nice. I want a normal/weird dream like that...!

Lol, I actually found this quite amusing in a disturbing way. We all have those wacky dreams sometimes, don't we? Anyways, awesome poem.