Very, very nice. I loved the lines "You're just my reflection
I see you only how I want to." Keep up the great work!!
~The One and Only

*raises hand* i'm one of those blurty people, but you already knew that, yes?
You've got some good liners in here so it's worth fixing up if ever you choose to. Plus this gets the point across that you're trying to make.

That describes a similar situation that I am in. My 'friend' hates me, and I still care for him. It is well written and I like the 2 parts of the mind talking to each other, discussing what is happening. I like the abstract use of language.

ooh this is good. but with a bit of work and punctuation i think it could be even better. keep writing i like reading your stuff =D