I was very excited to see that you started updating the story again and will continue to read. I can't wait to see how it all comes together

I just finished reading chapter 55 and even though it isn't what I'd expected I have to say that I really like this story. Tyreseus, I hope you continue.

The story is captivating and keeps you at the edge of your seat. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with everyone, it's very exciting and I do hope it's finished soon.

An absolutely amazing story! I am however very depressed it is not finished. I'll keep checking every now and then to see if anything new ever shows up. :)

Very well written. Reading this is like reading a printed novel, since no facts contradict eachother and the plot is extremely well crafted. Many elements have been interwoven, and all the ideas are excellent. I love this story, please update soon!
I find that this story mainly focuses on the gay couplings life.

This is an INCREDIBLE story. I love the fantasy aspects, I love the realism - but, most of all, I love the characters. They have all been built up so perfectly, and their relationships are so realistic... it's amazing.
The one problem that I see with this story is that, well, there are too many "out" homosexuals - and too many people who are willing to accept them. It just doesn't seem very realistic. Oh... and I can't say I like the relationship between Price/Terrell/Eric all that much. Well, I don't like the "Eric" part of that equation.
But, beyond all that... I am thoroughly impressed. I can't see why more people haven't reviewed, or why this isn't already published. (I can tell you one thing - I would LOVE to get a hold of this in paperback!)
Excellent job. I'm looking forward to more.

i love the story so much, but after city of sin 01...IM JUST SO CONFUSED!

T_T oh that was so sad! You are a very open person, you know that? ^_^ kudos to you. You're a great writer!

This story's getting god! hm I think Mischelle is their fifth, but I dunno.

O GO PRICE! Fire. Yes, burn! hee hee hee I think fire suits him, ya know?

hm interesting... I decided to try reading this again. hm on to the next chap!

This story seems pretty interesting so far. It's a little new to me, some of your ideas. Which is kind of unusual because I have a LARGE amount of variety in my stories. Interesting.

That was a very thoughtful warning. Thank you! ^-^ (even though I agree with it. ^-^ ) I'm sure a lot of people appreciated that. ^-^

hey i like your beginning. this kid seems to have it pretty bad. i have a feeling things are going to get better from here but i guess ill just have to find out eh?

I love this story! I at first thought that it might be a little cliche, but I was quickly drawn into the story by the character of Price. I now realize that this story is anything but cliche. The twists and turns the plot takes are crafted masterfully and all of the characters are fully developed even those that only briefly enter the story. Please continue, it is rare that a story as good as this one is found online and not in print. I can not wait for the next chapter!