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Reviews For: Of Life and Demons

umbrius
2004-09-07
ch 3,
JOE: (Grumble)
KYR: He is just a bit mad that you left off there, he was hoping for a bit more. (Pops Joey on back of head)
JOE: Sorry, can't wait to read more, hope you R&R our stuff too. I liked this chapter, and you ended it the perfect way. . .with a cliffhanger, it always keeps 'em wantin MORE!
KYR: Talkative, "aint 'ee?"
Obsessive Spazz
2004-06-08
ch 2,
Wow! Powerful story...ahem...parent abuse? Well, anyway, i am looking forward to another chapter most promptly. It's GGreeat!
umbrius
2004-03-28
ch 2,
JOE: HM...the inability to get past death...this only proves that she has a weak will.
KYR: *sighs* Death does both wonderful and horrible things to a family...
JOE:...though, while death is sad, it usually...
KYR:...brings a family closer together, not...
JOE:...further and further apart. I know what it is like to lose family, I've had a grandmother and an uncle die...
KYR:This was a good story, but there were a few typos-
JOE:Don't listen to her, we BOTH enjoyed your story.
umbrius
2004-03-26
ch 1,
JOE: You are getting better. We are enjoying watching you progress as a writer. And thanks about the whose-thoughts thing, I'll try to be more specific. While we read your stories, I have "Pledge of Allegiance Tour" or "Evanescence" playing.
KYR: Yes, we are both enjoying your stories. And about the song lyrics part, it is a little of both, shi is singing and listening, not everyone knows all the words to every song.
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