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| umbrius 2004-09-07 ch 3, | JOE: (Grumble) KYR: He is just a bit mad that you left off there, he was hoping for a bit more. (Pops Joey on back of head) JOE: Sorry, can't wait to read more, hope you R&R our stuff too. I liked this chapter, and you ended it the perfect way. . .with a cliffhanger, it always keeps 'em wantin MORE! KYR: Talkative, "aint 'ee?" |
| Obsessive Spazz 2004-06-08 ch 2, | Wow! Powerful story...ahem...parent abuse? Well, anyway, i am looking forward to another chapter most promptly. It's GGreeat! |
| umbrius 2004-03-28 ch 2, | JOE: HM...the inability to get past death...this only proves that she has a weak will. KYR: *sighs* Death does both wonderful and horrible things to a family... JOE:...though, while death is sad, it usually... KYR:...brings a family closer together, not... JOE:...further and further apart. I know what it is like to lose family, I've had a grandmother and an uncle die... KYR:This was a good story, but there were a few typos- JOE:Don't listen to her, we BOTH enjoyed your story. |
| umbrius 2004-03-26 ch 1, | JOE: You are getting better. We are enjoying watching you progress as a writer. And thanks about the whose-thoughts thing, I'll try to be more specific. While we read your stories, I have "Pledge of Allegiance Tour" or "Evanescence" playing. KYR: Yes, we are both enjoying your stories. And about the song lyrics part, it is a little of both, shi is singing and listening, not everyone knows all the words to every song. |