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oohaysemag2001 2005-12-18 . chapter 1
Doom fills the air; the world waits blindly by as each day passes moving closer to the end.

The Pieces are shifted into place.The warning has been sounded. Look Out It’s Too late.

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AntiPleasure 2004-03-27 . chapter 1
-sniff- aw what a good poem. The first two stanzas have some very nice imagery but then in the last two it transitions into pain and numbness (like you said) well nice poem.
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