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| Karani R. D'rak 2004-06-25 ch 1,  | abuseHI Sky this is joelles little sister could you read my storey orb and tell me what you think? by the way you storey is good :) |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-06-22 ch 14, | abuseO, that's really bad. *Still doesn't know for sure if Solais is dead (unless I missed something in the last chapter).* Are you going to start a new story now that this one is over? |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-06-22 ch 13, | abuseSorry, but *is rather confused* exactly what are we supposed to remember? Are we supposed to remember how magic was missused to kill the dragons unnaturally, and that we should never do that again like Laedon had? Or are we just supposed to remember the dragons in general, because that's their legacy? Either way, or maybe neither way, it's a very good ending. Does this mean that Solais is dies? |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-05-03 ch 12, | abuseHumm... Not sure why I didn't post for this chapter earlier, oh well, here goes. Yaay they're not dead yet!! And the curse was taken off Laedon!! But they're in deep ** :(. It's a great chapter I like it. P.S. Death to all cliff hangers! P.P.S. Write some more, the suspense is killing me! |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-04-09 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. Good thing Isariah didn't kill Laedon, it would totally have ruined the whole plot. Good ending, to the chapter, wonder what happens next. P.S. Cliff-hangers DIE! |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-04-08 ch 9, | abuseUmm... Wow!?! *is left speechless (to some extent)* That chapter was amazing... awsome!! I mean I was about to wish a torrent of pointy and sharp objects upon Ardelle and everyone else in that cursed army, and then I hear that Solais is her brother and now I just feel sorry for her. Did you get the idea for Ardelle's dream from "Caesar"? Anyway, I hope that Laedon's spell works and I hope that Tiyun finds the king before Solais does. *Awaits the posting of next chapter with great anticipation.* |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-04-08 ch 8, | abusePoop, poor, poor Jadeen :,(. He was nice. And Ardelle!! I thought there was something up with that whole army! I hope the king gets away (haven't read the next chapter yet [will in a moment]) Too bad Laedon got knocked out. :( |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-04-06 ch 7, | abusePineapples, pink hawks, and murder; nice touch! It said earlier that he was framed or something, interesting, what happened? Pineapples and pink hawks, Joelle |
| SemperAmorBELLE 2004-04-05 ch 2, | abusehehe. aww.. had to sign in to review. let's see...i cam from the xanga world, my pen name's HIPPOTHEMGAICAL. as for the review: Oo. was that some type of cliff hanger. a lot's been going on, i loved the start of chapter one. it really has this...alive and awake feel that just grasps you and pull you deep into the story. a wonderful take, with a wonderful plot. i'm interested to see what happens.. |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-04-03 ch 4, | abuseSkye, Write more I want to find out what happens next!! Oh, and could you please review my stories? "Splice" is the one I'm working on and the O's in the other one are supposed to be " or '. -Joelle |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseSkye, Very good start. I think you missed a word or two. Otherwise it's great. Too bad the king got shot. I'm going to read the next chapter now and find out what happens. -Joelle |
| theatreoftheabsurd 2004-04-03 ch 4, | abuseThis is a really well written piece of work so far- fantastic smooth prose and compelling, too- keep writing! - sofi x |