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| searchlight 2005-06-05 ch 5,  | abuseThat was fun to read! I loved the Jellyfish of Scag. How could you not love something called that? I actually thought the basis of the story was interesting, loved how you called the world of humans the Land of the Walkers. I thought my stories weren't that great and now I feel like taking them offline completely. They are closer to this writing than any of your recent works. Oh, well :( I loved it though! |
| Jonathan Moriarty 2004-04-15 ch 2, | abuseThis was great! Are you planning on continuing it? Please do. I'd love to hear more about the kingdoms under the sea, and especially about the Jellyfish of Scag, and the sponges! don't forget the sponges! i enjoyed the story and it made me smile... Thanks! :) |
| vanderhall 2004-04-01 ch 2, | abuseYou say this is bad but it's actually not. I mean, your other work is better, but that's because you're older and you've refined your skills. Really though, this isn't all that bad. It seems like it's got a good plot to it, and it's an interesting idea. ~V~ |
| Agathy 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like a fun beginning. Even though you wrote it in the seventh grade, it's still quite well-written and I found it enjoyable. These lands seem very interesting, so naturally I'd like to find out more about them. Continue, please. |
| FadeToBlack315 2004-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, Abby...you wrote this in SEVENTH grade?! It's amazing..lol, I remember the stories I wrote in 7th grade were nothing compared to this... What a wonderful way to start off. Update soon! |