amazing, it's so beautiful yet sad sounding. The flow and words just kind of roll of your tongue. Very, very nice.

Nice poem. I think i'm kinda lost, but i'm always lost so its not the poem. ^^
Great work!

This is interesting... probably the most advanced poem I have read in a long time. I like it a lot though. It made me think... a lot...

Great stuff until 'a beat always off.' I dunno, it's almost as if you just ran out of things to say, and had to fill it up. It's also a little redundant, but not particularly bad, I guess, just not as good as the rest of the poem. Great word choice, great, strong imagery- an over-all great poem. Keep writing. ^^

You're talented at this sort of thing. I think that poetry is a very hard art to master. To me, writing a thousand page novel is easier than writing a simple poem. If you want to go laugh at my poetry, go read Insanity. It makes me cringe when I read your beautiful piece. It is very powerful, evokes emotions, and leaves the reader breathless. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

Very good poem, makes you want to read the whole thing after just the first line. I must say that the work of it all is very fine indeed.

Wow. Very vivid and powerful. Great work! :)

You are an excellent writer. I wish I could write like you. I suck. Just read my latest poem.

Interesting piece, no grammar errors and that's a bonus ^_^.. I like the first two stanzas especially, the imagery is very nice "Until I draw a river of scarlet" that line is the best. Keep on writing!
Jenna xx