I've read a couple of your other poems and I just wanted to say that I love your style of writing. My favorite stanzas are the first and the second to last.
And about that last thing in your bio: I don't think it's too weird that only 4 people have put a particular story/poem of yours onto their favorites list. If I personally really like an author, I'll just add them to my favorite author list because otherwise it'd take too much space adding every single thing they've posted.

I really like this, it has a nice way of moving. going on the favs...
mezzie

very well written my fellow trumpetess. the only mistake i found was in the last stanza, 2nd line, it says "think about you even thought I" shouldn't it be though and not thought? but very nice work.

Wow, definatelly one of your more depressing ones...Still good though.

Nice bundle of just about everything...and the attempted title summed it up so well...v. nice.

hm... it's different, but i like it. the lack of capitalization and punctuation and the long, jumbled images this creates are very effective in this poem.
good emotions and images.
~Willow

As I said, I like it. The stanzas are something you should consider doing more often, I think...it really worked.