this story is awesome, yet so sad.. I cried my eyes out.. :| .. great writing..

my god, totally crying. so good.

That story was really good. She only got ten years for murder! she died at 25. that is so sad.

DARN! oh well, it was a good guess. *pout*
wait... did you say its almost over?!?!?!
NO!
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO THE LITTLE(ER) PEOPLE OF FICTIONPRESS.COM?!

aww man, i figure it out when it's revealed. shucks!

yay! good for you! KEEP WRITING!
i think the secret is he either killed someone or hes just doing this so nick can come and get her but hes fallen for her too.

I'm wondering if Evan is Ezzie...It's just a guess. tell me if i'm right. after all, she did call his (her) cell. and he wouldn't let her use his cell so who knows, tell me!

you're welcomed for the review. it's super good, i can't believe she's in luv with ezzie. oh no!

ahh!! noo!! scary!!
i like how she figured it out though... nice. :D

Sad! But a good story too. Keep going! ~V~

wow... i bet she loves Ezzie too!
maybe they'll be like a love triangle now!
oh wait... sorry, im sick (flu) and my minds not quite where its supposed to be.
wqell, keep writing or ill find you, kill you and write it myself!
just kidding dont worry
*Ever~White Rose*

that was really good. poor maddie, i can't believe she killed her twin. this is so sad, i hope she's okay and never gets caught

hey, dont stop there, how dare you stop there, i have to keep reading! *frantically clicks the spot where the next chapter should be* its not there!
WRITE IT! lol
*Ever~White Rose*

that was...interesting, i kind of got lost but it was good

lol no problem...i was just so happy that i could read more of the story :D and, i don't know, i just felt like thanking you...because, like, writers just put things up and half the time get NO feedback at all and this was just too good to suffer that fate.
about deviantART...okay! i think i'll probably try to set up an account tonight...i clicked around there for a bit but it got a little confusing, lol, i'll surive...haha. and the sense of community'll be great... :) i'll leave you a comment once i've gotten an account.
on to the commentary on this chapter: still trying to figure out what evan's doing. somehow it doesn't seem like he's going to actually try to kill her...like maybe he'll publicize an attempt or something in hopes to make things better, although i don't see how...ack it's so hard to figure out!! lol. i want some answers...hehe. anyway i feel kind of bad for ezzie AND for maddie...because maddie totally dissed her. but i can see why she'd be so freaked out.
anyway, rock on! :D