gnarly, but well wrote. Keep it up!

freakin awesome hoe! :D way better than mine and you know that...change the title to The Bi Poem and dedicate it to anthony...lol
well its awesome as ** and keep this crap up
-kitty

"My silence tells many things at once," great line. This was really well-written, I especially like the first and last lines. Keep writing!

Very nice.."HIs presence, his words, his eyes. her smile, her truth, her lies." I love those two lines...Awesome.