wow! this is really good! I loved the repetition, very well written!
~Chael~

I really like this one too. It's very sad but a sad that is kind of dull, it's a good thing though.

ohh...that was so good...the repetition of the two lines the talk...&the memories...did a great effect...good job...oh and pls...if you have the time...kindly give some of my works some review...tnx!
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