wow! I'm so amazed! you have a great deal of talent! (not tha tI didn't already know this, but wow!) hehehe
~Chael~

You asked for me to review for you so here I am. I really like this poem, often times I have had writer's block myself and the feelings are very similar to this. You did a very good job in showing the pain frustration that one may feel when they are having the problem of being unable to express themselves. I also like how you made it flow, it goes very well but with some odd stops, which is just like having writer's block. Sometimes everything flows along but sometimes things just don't work right.