I see you've finally decided to post this up ^^ Good for you. Well, you already know what I thought about it since I beta-ed it and all. But, just for the sake of the review, I like it a lot (though I hope your actual chapters won't be that short...)

In the future, though, don't hesitate to ask me to help proofread your works, 'kay? I'm here for you ;) and you know how to contact me. ^^

oh com' on! write some more!

Try all you want, but my story, is MINE! Oh, and I won't bother with the quote, although it was a good one...
Steenie is ok, but plz don't use my real name *hint hint* *cough* Enchantment *cough*.
Finally, you gone on with your story! See, updating isn't so hard! ^_^
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Yeah I know...
Um, I don't think "remain fainted" is correct grammar. Try, "stay unconscious" I'm telling you, the other thing didn't make sense.
If I had to choose, I'd pick Kitsuki for the profile thingy (no duh). You know, it'd kinda help if you put in some description...like characters and backround. Sorry, I'm into that kinda stuff. Anyways, then I won't complain as much about those links (to the pictures) that aren't working! *hint*
You know what I say. Update id you want more reviews!
...although at his point you must be sick of me and my super-long notes.
Oh, and maybe the reason the bio "cuts off" is because you posted the same stuff twice. Go take a look and you'll see what I mean. And also, can you teach me how to do italics and bold letters? Mine gets screwed up.
Until next time! *wink* ^_~

heh heh. That was an interesting meeting. BTW, I'm not the only one to review anymore. =P
I think the telepathic connection was cool. So was the sword duel, but I still think it needs more detail.
So, Kitsuki, Tanako, and Ashimoru already know each other? Cool...
Oh, and was "they" the portals *grins evilly*
Is Sasaki important? Did she die? Or get captured? Update soon please.
BTW, make the illusion clear. No one knows who cast it or what was happening after the conversation. Just put it in the next chapter--don't repost!! (i'm warning you)
Gr8 job though! Keep writing!

it's a really awsome story. and it's gonna be a really awsome manga too. keep writing. please?

Yeah, I sorta felt like leaving another review. First of all, STOP CHANGING THE SUMMARY! It's driving me crazy. It's fine the way it is. Also, don't rewrite the chapters. Then I have to go back and read them again...
Although I did like the final battlefield part in the beginning... (betcha I know who you're talking about ^_^)
BTW, your web with the pics needs some updating. Make it so the pictures can be enlarged when you click on them. That way it's easier to actually see the people.
Don't forget. The quicker you update, the more reviews you get (a piece of advice I myself should consider following...-_-U)

Hey! I enhoyed the profile. You should probably put more in (which I'm sure you will). Watch for typos.
BTW. Did you know that your summary's incomplete?
...you know what the people want--and that's updates (although I shouldn't really be talking since I haven't updated mine in forever -__-)
Hmm...Since Shinji's not pairing with Sogoku, I think Kokoro might do good with him. She does defend him a lot. And she seems to beg for romance since her name pratically means "heart"
I think I'm going to like your plot. But there is one thing about your story that sorta bothers me. Yeah, the end of the world is bad and all, but after Ragnarok, everything just gets reborn and starts again. Isn't that good? I mean, if you're going to lose anyway, why drag in three innocent (ok maybe not totally) people/children/teens from another world?

Tsk tsk. Before you start talking about the pairings, start updating first!! In any case, it's a good story, although I think it needs a bit more detail. Can't wait for some character descriptions (hint hint).
Keep up the good work. Glad you finally updated.
P.S. you can remove my other review.

I suggest you remove ch.2 --there's no point to it