wow...i think the dove part means whatever you wnant it to mean...not just it normal symbolism, but anything positive that you need...very good

aww! how sweet! i love fluffy stories/ poems! but i usually write stories because i suck at poetry. if you have time, check out my story, the enchantress :) Thanks

This was really good! I love your poems, you're able to fit so much emotion into such a small thing. And that's a big thing.

This is good...I'm not into the whole 'longing' business but...anyway...it was good.

Hi! great poem, speechless! keep it up!
Thanks for reviewing! XD yes, you know me and blacksun!lol. anyway, as he said, he will NOT take over the story. i'm working on fourth chapter, it should be done tommarro, or posted later tonight! wait till you meet Tyrael!
-Rachel
*Every legend leaves a mark*
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I really like this poem.
Maybe you could review some of my works, too?

Nice poem.