so... depressing. it's a different style to a lot that i read... but still it's very effective. i know exactly what you mean... well the way i've interpreted it anyway. I haven't directly experienced it, but i've seen it and yeah bla.
great job ~_^
~Karasu

Hey, I really like this one YVR! It's awesome. I love its simplicity! Good on You! People need to be more aware of these issues, because they are very serious, real issues. I don't mean to pick on you - But you forgot to capture the frustration & despair & the whole "Out-of-control" issue. But, since you don't have depression and aren't suicidal - you wouldn't know, I guess. Awesomeness. Are you going to write more on this one or move on to something else?

Wow. This is good. I know what you mean. I see this all the time. Sometimes I even feel like that, in a way. I really enjoyed it. I hope that you continue writing.

lol, , , , are we hinting at something here or something? Hahahahah .. . . don't add anything about a war in later please . . .
good so far . . . . keep it up!

O.K...
totally didn't get this one...
what was the bit about the potential about?
is she, like, dead or something?
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