Okay, can't say I've been a prostitute, but I've been in a situation similar to that. Good job describing it. It's beautiful.

um...i can't say that this is well written, but certain words leap out to give an impact; why, hallow...and others are subdued; please, just play with me more...so it gives it a very nice worded effect, like it's actually being said except it's in the mind...not that great, shall look at your other pieces, but it's powerful...perhaps you should take the same idea and work with it abit...how bout a story?
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very good... it reminds me of a girl I know...Also, I fixed the word "at" in my poem, so...hooray.

the last verse of this is crying out to me... i can't say that the poem is good, because it's not. It's well written, but the circumstances aren't good. Wonderful poem, i can see this poor girl in my mind's eye. I like the line, "just play with me more" it shows the helplessness of her, not just physically. well done.