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xFireLilly18x 2009-11-18 . chapter 25
I read your story through, and thought it was time for a review, lol. All I can find to say is, I loved it. I adored it. I enjoyed it.
You portrayed Blair's/Pippa's emotions about her sister, and when she had to tell, perfectly. That's all I can think of to say. Well besides Tom got really annoying at times(I just wanted to hit him sometimes, lol, and I'll never in my life be able to eat another fruit and not think of him ever again), Eddie was hilarious and a great attribute to the story, I LOVED Matt, hated, but also pitied, Leah and Leslie. All around great story. I enjoyed the read thoroughly!
ghurl00 2009-11-11 . chapter 25
Awesome read! Well done!:D
melaniedreams 2009-11-02 . chapter 25
wow, that was good ! just the right amount of angst, an evil sister, a hot tutor and a family too out-of-the-world to notice, a perfect combination.

it was a pleasure to resd you, you are clear and strait to the point, no mispelling or weird syntaxe. it's just a pleisure to follow you . thanks !
Alenor 2009-08-04 . chapter 25
hey, great story. i'm happy they had a nice ending. cya later ~ Alenor
Floppy125 2009-07-25 . chapter 25
AWSOME STORY! I LOVED IT! I'M GLAD THAT I READ IT ONCE FINISHED BECAUSE IF NOT YOU WOULD HAVE MENTALLY KILLED ME FOR SENDING YOU MILLIONS OF MESSAGES PLEADING YOU TO UPDATE... LOL.. ANYWAYS, I'M ALSO SO GLAD THAT I FOUND A BRITISH STORY! BECAUSE MOST OF THE STORIES HERE ARE AMERICAN OR FROM AUSTRALIA, AND IT REMINDED ME SO MUCH OF SCHOOL! BECAUSE I'M FROM ARGENTINA AND I HAVE TO SIT FOR THE A.S AND GCSE. GOSH... I'M RAMBLING. ANYWAYS, GREAT WORK! AND I WAS SURPRISED BY THE AMOUNT OF REVIEWS YOU'VE ANSWERED... LOVED THE STORY!!
Colie Rae 2009-07-17 . chapter 25
I absolutely loved this story!! It had plenty of drama but it was believable at the same time. Your characters were quirky but believably so. It was a perfect mix.
I loved some of the statements (I gave Eddie a warning look so he wouldn’t go over and sniff the jumper or something equally strange that you might do with a piece of clothing of someone you liked.) They were so ridiculous but true and it made me laugh. You had an awesome mix of emotions and power running through the story. Great work.
mia 2009-06-27 . chapter 13
awsome!
verdepomme 2009-06-16 . chapter 25
Hi!

i just wanted to say that i've just finished reading your story, and i think its excellent!

i really enjoyed the story line and characters you created, so much so i couldnt stop reading! i really should have been studying for my history test...but oh well!

xx
verdepomme
woesoflove 2009-06-12 . chapter 25
I just finished reading this story and just wanted to say that it was great. I loved the continuation of Tom and the obsession with fruit - that was hilarious, if unrealistic :D. The ending was a bit unsatisfying but all in all, I loved it.
rainstains tarte 2009-05-20 . chapter 12
"The gardener's a queer!" lawll
3DarkGoddess3 2009-02-15 . chapter 25
Really great story one of my new top favorites.
intercostalspace 2009-01-16 . chapter 2
what is wrong with this child and her priorities? sheesh. it's an ok fic so far. i hope she changes for the better though or i won't be able to stand her.
Riverdance 2009-01-04 . chapter 8
I just found time to review this story right now because i was too busy pressing the arrow to the next chapter. It is completely addictive- in a good way of course. But now I just decided to review because I hate reading a story without ever reviewing it.

And I'm reviewing now to say that i fell absolutely in love with it! Blair/ Pippa has quite an odd character... but i absolutely love her! I'm sure there's a good reason for that... And i also love the fact that Matt is quite witty... I love the touch it gave to the story. It makes it more fun to read. And how do you come up with the remarks/ insults? There's this girl in my class who for some reason really hates me (and i insist i have never done anything to offend her) and she usually drops these nasty comments which i can never reply back to. So yeah, I love it when the heroine of the story has good comebacks too.

I also love the fact that the story is set in England, London. Since where i come from we were once an English colony, we have the same school systme, so it is a nice change to actually understand the school situation for once. When i read stories set in America I tend to get confused because I don't really get the system. And I'm too lazy to search about it and actually understand how it works.

Okay, I'm babbling... I'd be surprised if you really read it all! BUt it's how I get when I'm really into a story... so yes I'll continue reading! I'll try to review soon!! I know the story is finished but anyway... back to reading...
pretitiful 2008-12-26 . chapter 25
i liked this story. it was different to other stories and it wasnt so cliche,which i really liked,
matt is a sweetie as well
:)
smile at the sun 2008-12-22 . chapter 25
Great story. I loved Blair (Pippa, Peach?) and Matt, Tom and Eddie and grandma and Licia, and I hated Leah. i loved the plot too, and how it all turned out. Great writing.
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