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| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 2,  | abuselol they'll get along =] |
| righthere431 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuselol aw they love each other =] |
| bugger off 2008-04-23 ch 25, | abuse:) *fav really enjoyed this story. ^^ WELL DONE XD |
| cherise 2008-04-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseI would just like to point out that somebody with that serious of an injury would not be ignored like that, the doctars would not wait 11 hours to do the surgery. I would actually know from personal experiences, you are told not to move, the paramedics are called, you go to the hospital in an abulence to an emergency room and are given imidiate attention. Also a broken ankle that has been set in place with a pin does not generally require a cast, and definatly not up to your thigh. |
| sunflowerchild 2008-04-08 ch 25, | abuseIs it weird that I want Tom to like Eddie? It would make an interesting story, however cliche. |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuselove this story, :) |
| troryfan3007 2008-03-26 ch 17, | abuseo... cancer... thats big stuff! loving the story so far! X Joanna X |
| troryfan3007 2008-03-26 ch 12, | abusewow this story is amazing! and it's goodto see some proper british behaviour! *favouriting* X Joanna X |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-14 ch 25, | abusewow that was a reawlly good storyxD |
| Deafgurl's world 2008-03-13 ch 25, | abuseHey! I gladly that Matt and Blair end up together. I gladly everything alright between both. Is this story nearly finished? Hurry update soon. |
| Melika Elena 2008-03-01 ch 25, | abuseGood story. I think that unlike other love/hate relationship stories, you did an excellent job with transitioning Pippa and Matt's relationship. However, I think you could have done a lot more with Leah's character. I felt that her abuse and the reasons behind it were unrealistic and kind of unreasonable. Also, there should have been more follow-up to the consequences that Leah faced. There was also no real closure with Pippa's father either. However, it was an entertaining and funny story (I particularly enjoyed Eddie's fascination with Tom and Tom's fascination with fruit.) |
| hiccups 2008-02-24 ch 25, anon. | abuseperfect ending ;) thankyou! |
| x head x o v e r x feet x 2008-02-15 ch 25, | abuseNO! it ended :[ i love this story! i SO have to read more of your stuff. Wow, it took you ages to write it though... I normally finish a book in a matter of months :S. Great work. I like it so much because it has a bit of everything. (romance, angst, action... etc.) Keep writing!! |
| x head x o v e r x feet x 2008-02-14 ch 12, | abusehey! i've been reading this story for a while. it's really great. i would have reviewed every chapter individually, but unfortunately my computer is REALLY whacked up so yeah. SORRY~! [hopefully] i'll review the other chapters. bye~! |
| x3life 2008-02-08 ch 25, | abuseomg loved your story!! it was soo good and cute =) and her nick name peach. aww haha. anywayss... it was great and totally enjoyed reading it!! |